Team & Individual Leadership

Linda osei
by Linda Osei
Submission date: 30-Oct-2022 06:28PM (UTC+0000)
Submission ID: 187702428
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GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
Thank you for submitting this Formative
Assignment of Team & Individual Leadership:
Mentoring & Coaching Others
Student: Linda Osei/ ID – 25623
Originality: 15%
The student has duly signed the declaration sheet
which is a good practice.
Please see the summary of the feedback below;
Add a footer in accordance with the assignment
brief.
Remove all assessment criteria and paraphrase sub
headings.
Paraphrase all text in colour.
Please follow the bubble comments.
Structure your work as some paragraphs are very
long.
You need more references in your work.
Follow the command verbs and assessment
criteria to keep on track.
See me after class
Amina Ali

07/11/2022
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Remove all assessment criteria and paraphrase sub headings
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paraphrase
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Where is the date?
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This is off point
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Comment 10
This is only one session, what about others?
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Comment 13
How is this used in the mentoring plan?
Comment 14
How is this used in the mentoring plan?
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Comment 15
How is this used in the mentoring plan?
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Comment 17
Which one do you use and why? What about mentoring style?
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