Feedback comments This paper was not ready to submit. It needed a good, close review and re-edit before submisssion. It did not provide an adequate response to the assessment task. It is strongly recommend that you seek assistance in interpreting and responding to assessment tasks. Because your grade fell below 50%, a second marker reviewed your paper. The final mark was 15/40. The original graded paper and the second reviewer’s rubric and comments are attached. A review of your progress in this Unit is warranted. Please see my follow up email.